[Aquanet] October critique

[Arsenault Lorraine]

Hello Louise,

I love the colors that you used and your washes are very well done.  What is bothering me is the shape of your whole egg in the middle.  I feel as if the top half is not quite oval, it seems to have a malformation in the top middle.  The bottom half seems to be perfect.  It might be just my eyes but that is what I see.  

I love the two egg pieces to the left, the contrast between the inside and the outside of the shell.

It makes me want to try this subject!  I had already seen it, in a more white version but yours is very interesting too.

Good work !

Lorraine Arsenault
arseneaux at sympatico.ca 
www.lorrainearsenault.com
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