[Aquanet] May critique

[ezrider1je at comcast.net]

I love this painting, Phyllis.  The colors are strong and fresh; all in all it is a very appealing painting.  Maybe it is my computer, but I had trouble figuring out that the cows were cows.  If it isn't my computer's fault, possibly the cows could be a bit larger. I agree with Pat that the spacing of the cows isn't ideal and that overlapping two might be better.  The foreground is beautiful and the calligraphy works well, as do the distant mountains. 



Pat, maybe you can do a "manly" flower, something with big, spiny, thorns.  I don't think that would compromise your masculinity. 



Paint on, 



Judy 
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