[Aquanet] March Member Critique

[patchapin at mindspring.com]

Hey, Joe, nice piece!  I can almost feel the misty and I like the fadeaway, 
but when I hit the beach I become disoriented -- I think it needs to be 
darker, or at least to have the 'wet' strip that's always down by the waves, 
help to orient far and near?

Did you really get to see red dune flowers?  I always run into yellow, white 
or pink ones!  Makes me want to visit Rhode Island just to 
see.....................

pat chapin
www.patchapin.com

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Raymond Blum" <raymond at paidtech.com>
To: "aquanetArt" <aquanet at cleverwhiz.com>
Sent: Sunday, March 01, 2009 3:44 PM
Subject: [Aquanet] March Member Critique


> Hi all
>   The Member Critique painting for March is up.  Joe Ferrara has
> submitted a beautiful seascape.  It is on the home page now 
> http://www.aquanetart.com
>
> Please take a look and use the list to discuss and offer Joe your
> thoughts.
> ---Raymond
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