[Aquanet] the November critique

[Virginia Haines]

Pat:  to answer your email:  
My thoughts are....Does it need a center point of interest??...I felt there was something missing.  The colors in the distance on the painting image shown are darker than my original, so it is harder to tell, but it does give me an idea where to go from here...since it shows more strength in the site's image.  Original is more faded out from center to the distance.
virginia
----- Original Message ----- 
From: pat davis 
To: aquanet 
Sent: Saturday, November 01, 2008 12:27 PM
Subject: [Aquanet] the November critique


Hi, Virginia

You ask for help improving the painting. What bothers you about it such 
that it is up for critique? Composition?  Colour? I think knowing this 
would help us (me certainly) look at the piece with more chance of 
helping you.

cheers
pat

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