[Aquanet] July Critique Painting

[Roy Boston]

Hi Peter,

An interesting painting for those in this part of the world "down under" 
- where is it - a title would help.  A good layout of interesting shapes 
and an effective use of colour.  Perhaps stronger darks would increase 
the impact and the foreground bamboo? could be stronger to increase the 
sense of depth.......Well done, I enjoyed it

Roy in New Zealand

Liz wrote:
> First time to show a painting for critique, Peter Parker, is our July 
> volunteer.  Visit the website and offer your comments, encouragement, etc.
> Need volunteers for coming month(s). Come on, you members in the silent 
> community.  Volunteer!....no pain, no gain!
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> Liz
> www.naturecoastwebsites.com
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