[Aquanet] September Critique

[Mary E Whitehill]

Bright and fresh and good shapes and colors Julie. Thanks for sharing
that. 
 Three suggestions.
 1. Since the light on the figures casts a shadow behind them, the light
on the trees would cast warm shadows at their base.
 2. A couple of the trees might overlap instead of being all separated.
 3. Atmospheric perspective on the road as well as linear, ie dull the
color a bit in the distance.
M. E. Whitehill wtrclr at juno.com.
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