[Aquanet] oct crit

[Shantmarie at aol.com]

I really like what you have done with this subject and the looseness  of the 
style seems appropriate for this type of passionate  drama. 
 
 I agree with Pat about the blue, I would have liked to see  the blue color 
and value  follow thru to the other side of the  bull fighter just a bit 
more....so it doesn't make an abrupt  stop  ...  the extended color would  keeps the 
eye  traveling .   
 
 
Very nice work overall, have you considered a series?  Perhaps  you can 
explore this topic and develop it until you have stated all  that you feel.  
 
Shanti Marie
 





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