[Aquanet] October critique

[Dave Turk (dturk)]

Dear Anonymous Artist -

I like the strong contrasts from the sun/shadows. I like the bright
colors and loose style. The rendering near the bull's feet gives a sense
of motion. Compositionally, the piece seems to be weighted to the left.

Dave

 

-----Original Message-----
From: aquanet-bounces at thedigitalbraintrust.net
[mailto:aquanet-bounces at thedigitalbraintrust.net] On Behalf Of Liz
Sent: Monday, October 01, 2007 6:48 AM
To: aquanetArt
Subject: [Aquanet] October critique

As per my previous email, we have an Anonymous Artist this month who
would like to hear from you about a new endeavor. 

> My suggestion is that members submit a painting for critique that I 
> will post _anonymously  _keeping the artist's name hidden and known 
> only to me. Submit a painting on which you truly want to read critical

> comments. Do you have an old one you have never been able to finish 
> for some reason?  Don't know what to do next?  Did you try something 
> new you aren't sure of? Or do you have one you want to put out there 
> just for fun?

What's successful in the painting? what needs improvement?  Your
comments are invited.

Also: need a volunteer for November  -- can be anonymous  or  not.....

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Liz
www.naturecoastwebsites.com
www.sitesbyliz.com




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