[Aquanet] November critique

[Lorraine Dietrich]

Hi Virginia and All

Really like that subject. 

I'd like the figure's colours to be more decisive and intense or saturated.
There is a small problem in the ground's perspective and it would have more impact if more grayed or more drab. 

Maybe it would be a nice idea to see the subjects from nearer ? I don't know what others think of that idea.

Just my opinion, maybe I'm wrong....

LORRAINE P. DIETRICH, iaf, news
artiste peintre / artist 
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français http://www.artsquebec.com/fr/html/oeuvre_artiste.asp?ida=1227
www.centrart.qc.ca/artistes/artvisuel/ldietrich/ecran.html

english  http://www.artsquebec.com/en/html/oeuvre_artiste.asp?ida=1227
http://www.eeag.org/ldietrich/ldietrich.html

IAF  http://institutdesartsfiguratifs.com/pages_public/artistes_fiche.php?id_artiste=5

Galerie le Bourget, Montréal
www.galerielebourget.com/
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