[Aquanet] merry christmas

[pat davis]

Hi, Claudia.

You've presented us with a problem- two excellent watercolours to 
critique. Of the two, I definitely prefer Diessiger Tag am Meer because 
of the warm yellow in the foreground that makes it (for me) more 
cheerful. Of the other, the only suggestion I might make would be to 
make the birds in the sky a bit more random as they seem to form two 
diagonal lines.

As I noted at the beginning, these are two really good pieces!!!

IMHO
pat
> Its the time before Christmas and I am off of work for 3 weeks. That gives
> me some time to do some painting.  I was looking up my summers travelling
> photos from Washington an decided to try
> to paint the ocean for a change. I am not very familiar with the objekt
> since we don't have an ocean nearby.  So anyone who has the time, besides
> the busy christmas shopping ' to look up my website
> I would appreciate your critique.
>
> I wish a merry christmas to all of you and a wonderful and creative new
> year.
>
> many warm greetings from very cold switerland
>
> Claudia Arztmann
> http://www.claudia-arztmann.ch/landschaften.htm
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